I was very happy with this drawing when I had finished it but I’ve come to realize that it doesn’t quite fit the story that I am telling. I don’t like the fact that the ‘complicated’ or ‘evil’ brother is grabbing the woman that way. It was originally meant to reflect his corrupt or questionable nature, but it feels too vulgar and it doesn’t add to his character. Most of all, I don’t like the fact that simpleton carries the boar’s head in front of everyone to see. For the eventuality of the story to be believable, it’s important that no one sees that he was the real hero of the story. Despite this drawing being a step forward at the time and a lot of fun to do, it will have to be redone. The credibility of the witnesses may be questionable, but I do not want to have to explain something like that as it feels like extra baggage that is not really needed.